This is a concrete poem. I wrote it while my dad was in the hospital back in 1999. I was at my Aunt Truth's house sitting cross legged on the leather couch with a view of her kitchen with it's many chickens tucked into nooks and crannies. I was, once again, struck by the beauty of my past. Not everything was "bad" then. That's the irony of the past, it's both good and bad in the most awkward of times. I remember seeing this mountain on trips to Anchorage with Mom and Joe. Depending on the time of year we would either be counting moose or rabbits on our way there. At school, I heard a legend about this mountain and it never left me. What a beautiful thing to see on your way to town.
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Here is my poem:
1999
In the Matanuska valley near Anchorage, Alaska, lays a mountain that resembles a woman’s shape. Many legends have been made about how she, who’s true name is Mt. Susitna, came to be… and she is called:
Sleeping Lady Mountain
White
crystalline
sprinkled in
blue stone for-
ms your shapely
frame-a profile
seen for eons-
hair running
like an
angry ocean in
mid-thought-cooled
to the touch- while
you lay- daisies leave
yellow marks on your
cheeks ,purple-
green-fuchsia
flowers
adorn
your curves
as a sharp horn-
ed moose travels
through your bo-
som, a golden
brown bear awa-
kens in your
navel- until
the brisk
white shawl
shelters you
again from
Winter’s
stinging
presence-
my eyes
tingle at
the bright-
ness of
your pow-
der overlay- I
can’t look away.
Very beautiful, Shelby. I like how you have imitated the gentle feminine form of the mountain. I think the plants and animals alive on the mountain / woman are very playful, as well your subtle way of taking the mountain through the seasons. I'm glad you posted it.
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